Monday, September 15, 2008

Paper One Assignment

Thesis Statement: Darfur's society is a major issue due to its violence which is shown through a popular video game titled Darfur is Dying.

The issue of McDonalds food being one of the main causes of obesity in the states.

(Still looking for another game to choose that would somewhat relate to Darfur is Dying)

A. Ethical or Unethical
1. Darfur is Dying concept
2. What's the main controversial issue
3. Society's views on the issues

B. McDonalds is "Bad for the body"
1. Activists against McD's food options
2. McD's causes obesity amongst young people
3. Bad talking the company's motos

C. Similarities in which they are controversal
1. Darfurs society is a serious issue
2. History on the issues in Darfur
3. Destruction within the country

D. McDonalds issues
1. Obesity in America is extremely high
2. Some blame popular fast food chains such as McD's
3. "Super Size Me" was hurting the nations health

E. Facts
1. Research info on the meaning of ethics
2. McD's variety of food options
3. Darfur is Dying main view points
4. Darfur donations/informational link

1 comment:

NakiaMBlue said...

I see that you have two possible thesis statements. If those are the two video games that you are going to focus on then you could somehow incorporate both games into your thesis statement and create an argument based on both games. I also think that the content of your two games do not have to relate but the games could relate in terms of the types of games they are (i.e. both games could be adver games). Then you could compare and contrast how each game fulfills the criteria of an adver game in terms of P.A.S.S. Your outline touches on some good points concerning each game.